This is the "Lilly May" version  I am going to use in my animation short. I had many versions of the "Lilly May" character, but I am happy with this one.

Zooming in on a yellow color house. 5sec 

fade in to Lilly's room.

Script : Lilly May and turtle        Copy right 

A girl in a messy room, she continues making more mess.

Mum opens a door and unloads a bag of food into the fridge.

The girl is drawing on the wall with a pencil.

Mum turning the door knob with “Lilly” on the door. ( Lilly you in there?)

Mum looks shock.  Mum shouts (you must clean it up).

Lilly cleans a bit of mess, and start walking out of her room to the television.

Mum said “No TV, you are to clean your room”

Girl stormed out of the house.

Girl kicking up gravel as she walks away from the yellow house

Girl sits under a tree in a park, head down. fade.

Girl throws a stone. 

Girl picks up a large stone, about to throw it and discovers it is a turtle.

Back of the girl ,heading home  (fade)

Girl feeding a misbehaving turtle.( turtle spinning on the bowl of food, food spills and splashes)  ( next to a faded drawing on the wall).

Lilly cleans the turtle, and wipes the spill off , while checking on mum, mum is busy on washing clothing.

Girl said“You behave now.”.turtle mutters

Girl check on the mum , mum is cooking.   

Lilly walks out of the room left the door ajar  fade

Lilly open the door, shock horror ‘ohhh, what have you done’

The wall covered with food mesh , while the turtle spinning so fast in the bowl (laughter) 

Lilly look at the mess that the turtle made (colorful mess of food ) and she glance at the faded drawing on the wall while Checks the door (close). ( fade).

Mum walks to Lilly's room, peers in and a shock looks on her face.

Lilly looks shock. “Ohh mum’’
Mum looks shock -ohh , Lilly

Zooming out to the room The wall is clean and the room is spotless with a drawing on paper pins on the wall – zooming-in on the picture  mum and Lilly holding hands with a big smiling face and dad with a halo and walking on a floor of gold with Jesus by his side.- written “My loving family”

Both embraces

Music :Creature big and small The LORD GOD love them all.

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The End

I am going back to Lilly May and the turtle story, and to put Moses And The Burning Bush on hold.

I am happy with my decision , and it will work out for the best. I know it will, I thanking the Lord God for that.

Lilly May and Turtle

Premise:: Lilly May thought that her overworked mum is too serious to have fun. Looking after a much loved pet turtle made her realised that her mum loves her and cares for her.

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Out of boredom, Lilly making a mess of her room, drawing on the wall!

Mum command Lilly to clean up her room. Lilly refused to obey, and storm out of the house, walk to a park nearby. She discover a turtle, took it home as her pet.  Lilly became a loving mother to this wild mischief turtle.

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